ears

Mah ears are bleeding a lot. This noise should be sealed away. The original guitar solo might be good if you added some drum and bass.

alright

It was alright. The constant super fast beat made it hard to emphasize when when you want to make certain parts full. Again, watch out for the repetitive sound.

Recording

It's not about the software. It's about the equipment. A nice professional microphone will work but they can be expensive. You'll also want to record in a room with very minimal echo. Recording equipment is generally expensive, but it can be worth it if you're serious about making music in your home.